Shirt #2 - Grey Linen

Here's my second attempt at that Simplicity pattern. I'm not super keen on it - I'm thinking of removing the sleeves and adding armhole binding to this version, too. Do you think they're too poofy? Adam said it looked like I was wearing shoulderpads.

 

I hate to feel like I'm wasting nice fabric on something I probably won't wear very much. Although maybe with some wider-leg pants and higher shoes?